New landing page site for some advertising

[myspacepimp]

awebsitethatworksforyou(dot)com.au

What do you guys think? :D:D:D

[Connections]

too much text,

looks like a scam..

text all in different sizes lol..

some guy talking haha

the best landing pages ive seen are ones which are easy to read with limited text...

[myspacepimp]

too much text,

looks like a scam..

text all in different sizes lol..

some guy talking haha

the best landing pages ive seen are ones which are easy to read with limited text...

My most successful sales letters have always been long copy. Since I've been sending prospects to this one via some advertising, it seems to have be working also.

I'm not selling a $2 product here. While a smaller percentage of people read the entire letter, they convert from an enquiry to a sale at a massively higher rate.

The animated characters will go and real people will replace them, I just wanted to get the scripts right before I pay models to act for it.

[Connections]

I don't know depends which demographic your targeting for your sales.

Just was been honest and telling you what I think lol

[myspacepimp]

I don't know depends which demographic your targeting for your sales.

Just was been honest and telling you what I think lol

Yeah, It's not targeted at over price conscious tyre kickers. It's being advertised to business savvy managers of medium to large firms that are expecting to pay $10-$20,000. These are the guys that I can save thousands.

Still needs a lot of tweaking, it's only new.

I probably could also make it look a bit easier on the eyes though like you said :)