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cadengrant
September 2nd, 2008, 02:42 PM
OK I just designed this new website. It's using MSLS. Anyway, it's www.bestweblayouts.net. I'm trying to target girls, and it's kind of hard because I'm a guy and I don't know how to make it look too appealing to girls. Anyway, what do you guys think? http://bestweblayouts.net

cadengrant
September 3rd, 2008, 01:37 PM
Anybody? Not that hard to review a site.

Ashley
September 3rd, 2008, 01:43 PM
- The small text needs to be bolder and have less of a border... maybe a dropshadow instead.

- The right and left border colors really clash with the background colors. Try a neutral color like dark grey instead.

- Speaking of the background, the color doesn't really match anything and a solid color doesn't really suit that layout... maybe some polka dots in various colors or something.

- The color of the "added on" text is pretty hard on the eyes.

- The grey color of the menu titles kind of takes away from the whole layout. I'd make the background to each the same color as each sections links, and then make the font color a few shades darker. Also, I'd make the font size bigger on the titles or reduce the padding size so the backgrounds aren't so "thick".

- Add more... obviously. :D But yeah, that's it.

:winkiss:

Andrew2
September 3rd, 2008, 02:22 PM
Ooh, Content looks nice. Redo the header so it's less gay/girly/femmy and more nuetral I think it would look better.

cadengrant
September 3rd, 2008, 02:30 PM
Thanks. But my target are girls so I want to make it gay/girly/femmy

PlumGreekMob
September 4th, 2008, 01:47 AM
I think the header is to bright, it makes it hard on the eyes.

christi78
September 4th, 2008, 02:00 AM
applebooty pointed out a lot I agree with but I'd definitely change the color of "BESTWEB" in your header it's just to light (hard on the eyes), the right and left border colors really clash with the background colors which don't really match,
the color of the "added on" text is pretty hard on the eyes. Nice start though :)

cadengrant
September 14th, 2008, 10:15 AM
Thank you guys :)

pimpyourdino
September 14th, 2008, 10:24 AM
still looks like a preschool version of hot-lyts? :detective:

TaintedPearls
September 14th, 2008, 10:49 AM
still looks like a preschool version of hot-lyts? :detective:

that's the site i thought of.......it looks girly to me....

cadengrant
September 23rd, 2008, 04:32 PM
still looks like a preschool version of hot-lyts? :detective:

thanks.. preschool =/ it's not done, working on content first.

tylaa
September 23rd, 2008, 05:24 PM
yeah it will definitely target girls, it reminds me of hot-lyts a lottt though.. lol