improved

[retro-bliss]

Okay an improved header made by me.
http://i21.tinypic.com/10rojdk.png

what do you think?

any c/c?

thanks :)

[retro-bliss]

I will be making this into a proper layout soon (possibly) so I need some c/c and suggestions and comments :)

Also, please recommend a good font to use instead of the the current one on the layout.

Sorry to double post, couldn't edit my earlier post... :/

[Matt]

It's nice.
It needs some sort of border though.
And whats with the strange blobs? Are they filled with a glitter fill? Or did you just add noise to them?

[Kasami2k4]

Make the header text bigger. And I dont like the glitterpatterns :\

[Matt]

Isn't the heart on the far left from a "grunge heart" gen?

[kenzie]

When I think of "Dollie Delight" I don't think of a site with a dark, grey layout. :P I know it has some pink but I think it could use some more bright colors. :biggrin:

[retro-bliss]

Thanks both of you :)

Make the header text bigger. And I dont like the glitterpatterns :\

what do you mean by glitter patterns?
:)

Lol I everyone is saying I have too much myspace/graphic stuff for a dollie site but I named it that when i was dollie crazy... now i don't want a doll site.. and I can't afford another domain so yh I have to keep this one

Also, no it isn't from a generator :S

[Matt]

Um- http://applause.nu/grungeheart/

Where'd you get it then?

[Kasami2k4]

Its a brush, Mawt.. Theres a whole series of them.

[Matt]

Stop calling me mawt, Tiffany . You know my damn name.

[Kasami2k4]

http://i22.tinypic.com/2e4hppj.jpg

here ;/ And dammit no

[Matt]

I didn't say "Well- show me the set because I don't believe you" did I?

[retro-bliss]

Lol thanks kasami and tiffany :)
and mawt, no one would call u mawt if it wasn't ur username in the first place :P

[Kasami2k4]

Haha kasami and tiffany ;( I AM tiffany ;p

I posted the set for you to USE, not to prove theyre a brushset

[Matt]

Even thought my real name is right next to my username?

[retro-bliss]

Haha kasami and tiffany ;( I AM tiffany ;p

I posted the set for you to USE, not to prove theyre a brushset


LOL mistype lol, i meant to say:

Kasami(tiffany) lol

anyway, what did u mean by glitter patterns?

[glacialflash]

Its a nice layout but I think you should use more bright colours and i think you should make the text bigger.
BTW Thanks for the brush Tiff

[Ashley]

Dang, someone's a little cranky today! :P
I think it looks good, except the outline on the heart brush. I think it looks really jagged and messy. =/ I also don't like the splatter.. or whatever that is, of noise that you've got there.

It looks very cute though. Nice job! :)

[sshjustkissme]

I agree with Kenzie on using brighter colors instead of a pink/grey scheme. I would get rid of the dissolved dots also.

As for suggesting fonts,
http://www.dafont.com/font.php?file=ingrata&page=1&nb_ppp_old=10&text=Dollie+Delight&nb_ppp=10&psize=m&classt=alpha
http://www.dafont.com/font.php?file=rough_draft&page=1&nb_ppp_old=10&text=Dollie+Delight&nb_ppp=10&psize=l&classt=alpha
http://www.dafont.com/font.php?file=fashion_victim&page=1&nb_ppp_old=10&text=Dollie+Delight&nb_ppp=10&psize=m&classt=alpha
http://www.dafont.com/font.php?file=market_deco&page=1&nb_ppp_old=10&text=Dollie+Delight&nb_ppp=10&psize=m&classt=alpha
http://www.dafont.com/font.php?file=ballpark_weiner&page=1&nb_ppp_old=10&text=Dollie+Delight&nb_ppp=10&psize=m&classt=alpha

..yeah, I like those. xP

[Ammy]

Thanks for the links Linda! I was just looking for some new fonts :P

I really like the pink and gray together on the header I love those heart brushes :P Like everyone's said the noise splatters look a bit like a mistake.. and the white outlines on everything is a little sharp, especially on the heart and the "graphics glitters and more" and the "!" on the end of that has lost it's little dot at the end and looks like an l :P But I really like the fonts you used together and I reckon it'd turn into a great layout if those little things are edited! Nice work =D